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From: Eddie Davidson
I feel like this is a really interesting take on the NIS program. It brings up so much neglect and sadness though it's hard to enjoy some of the journey. Is there going to be any body positivity?
My understanding of the NIS program is that it's not inflicting a torture on students to strip them of clothing to humiliate them by cruel administrators but more of a opportunity to normalize the body, reduce repression and curiosity which lowers teen pregnancy because teenagers are less confined to oversexualize themselves, it reduces body shaming and kink shaming and even slut shaming with reasonable requests.
I've seen your stories, the Breeder one too. Haven't had a chance to begin reading it since I've been writing my last two stories over the past 2 1/2 years (The Vodou Physicist and Freedom).
What I hate about the original NiS premise was its humiliation and non-consensual elements. My stories reflect that feeling, but in Freedom, I've added a new wrinkle that makes nudity in school acceptable. Another place where I soften the humiliation is in Kevin and Denise, where they make the Program easier to accept.
From: S-Schot
[Writes freqently after chapters]
Chapter 3
Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your stories. For now I got plenty which I still need to read and if it's all as great as what I've read so far I think you're one of the best authors on this site. Nonetheless, there's always room for improvement. I hope you can find it.
Chapter 9
Another few excellent chapters, I'm looking forward to more.
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Anyway, I look forward to your next chapters when the program actually starts and how the resistance will work out. It's so much fun reading this story, your other one (Roger and Cynthia) as well by the way, another great story. I'm enjoying it.
Chapter 10
And there's yet another awesome chapter.
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But keep up the good work, I like reading how things are done in a world different from the one I live in.
Chapter 24
And this marks the end of yet another awesome story. In a certain way I'm kind of disappointed, I would love to have read more of it.
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Anyway, now that this story is over, I'm looking forward to reading others. The existing ones plus maybe future stories. Have you got any plans for that? I certainly hope so, like I said your stories are the best program stories I've ever came across.
From: gil-more
Excellent story, as always. I am really enjoying your work.
From: jdude13
Great story. Plus I gotta kick out of seeing Pine View (aka Pine Tree) as part of a story. Clubhouse, pavilion, showers by the pool, all real places and show some familiarity with a favorite place. And good AA county references and usage. Extra points for these local references :)
From: filbert_1
To @wgb97: Ndenyal has written several and all well worth reading, IMHO.
From: wgb97
This is first story I have seen in this universe that is tackling the idiocies of this program. My first thoughts were good for you because that is something that really needs stressing: Adult sexual pleasure from naked teenagers and using them as 'teaching aids' that actually delves into pornogarphy along wiht quite a bid of sadomastochism (sp) and even broaches pain as a sexual activity.
So far, I like how you have put this on the personal level on both sides of that coin.
From: rycliff_24
Finally a realistic portrayal of what would actually happen in a modern high school which implemented this insane policy. I've read a few of these to see if anyone would address the issues head on none did that I found. I saw yours and read the intro and knew it would be much more realistic. Thanks